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Max Chee
StarFleet Enterprises
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2011.08.19 11:50:00 - [1]
 

Hey guys, just thought of posting this, seeing that this forum is only flooded with "quitting" post. Yeah, after the GIG incident about 2 months ago, I am happy to come back. As a player and a person in real life, I love to try everything, and when I say everything I mean EVERYTHING. So, when it comes to games my attention span wouldn't even last a day or so. I knew this was bad for I will never be master of anything and only a jack of all trades. I treated MMO the same way. I have played WoW, Rift and some other local MMO as well.

Now allow me tell you a love story, last year on a faithful day I met this beautiful young girl named EVE who was introduced by her best friend CCP. I fell in love with her, she showed me what it was like to be loved, betrayed and so many other feelings. Yes, we had our up's and down. Sometime we would make up till the wee morning and sometimes we wouldn't speak for a month until I had to buy her a an apology card which usually cost around $15 and it would last for a month until I had to buy her another cause of our arguments. However, I knew my life would never be the same.

Every time when I thought I would leave her forever she always seems to have the charm of seducing me back into her arms. No other girls were like her, she was unique, special and most of all realistic. She wasn't a gold digger like the other girls who only wanted my money, they would do almost anything just to suck my hard earn money. But, EVE was different, she wouldn't "hold my hand" whenever I made a mistake, instead she forced me to stand on my two feet, and if I didn't she would just leave me angry and lying on the floor.

"If you make mistakes, learn from it and move on" that's what she always said to me. When I was too upset to accept this, I would just walk away from her. Soon, I learned that she was the most precious being I had ever met. I respected her for her principles. One day when we were window shopping she wanted me to buy for her a monocle but I didn't really have the money, however she insisted that if I did she would be really happy. So, by hook AND crook I ditched out the money to get her one. She seemed happy after that but something was telling me she wanted more.

She had a best friend named CCP, whom I think secretly used her to get to fund her smoke habit. One evening I found EVE sobbing quietly, I asked her why, and then she told me something I would never forget. I was beyond shocked. I felt my heart dropped like a bomb, she told me that her best friend CCP blackmailed her to fund CCP's two lovers who had financial problems. When I ask who, she said one was called Wot and the other was Dusk. She also told me that she had sold the monocle I bought for her to pay CCP, or else my loved EVE would die

She then walked to the cupboard and showed me a letter called "Lust Is Good" The letter read

" Dear, EVE I know you are really closed to him. You loved him more than me, however I noticed he is quite rich and often buys you cards of apology. Now I need some help from you or should I say rather from "him" I have two boyfriends as you know and they are now moving in to two separate houses, so I really need the money from your boyfriend. I know he would not simply give me the money if you tell him the truth. So I need you to ask him indirectly by asking him to buy one of those expensive monocles, because I know a friend who buys them at a high price.
However I need more money. I know you're not gold digger and you even promised your boyfriend that you won't ask him to buy anything more than an apology card every month but if I were to fund my boyfriends, I need you to break your promise and dig as much money as you can from him. I was thinking that you could ask him to buy "gold" jewellery and send it to me. I am sorry I have to do this but if I don't get my money in a month’s time I will make both of you break up for good, and you will never find another man like him. Please understand this.[contin

Max Chee
StarFleet Enterprises
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2011.08.19 11:56:00 - [2]
 

Edited by: Max Chee on 20/08/2011 11:48:36
Edited by: Max Chee on 20/08/2011 11:46:30

How could CCP do this to me? I trusted her so much and was glad she had introduced me EVE but this!? This was horrible; she used EVE to get money out of me. She even forced her to ask me to buy a stupid monocle. And now "golden" jewelry.
This has gone too far, if she likes gold I am going to put one in between her head. I swear.

One night CCP opened the door only to find me sitting on a chair with a revolver in my hand. "You like gold eh? How about gold ammo? Inside this revolver there's only one bullet and it's a 24 carat golden bullet. I will spin the barrel and pull the trigger. If it's blank that I'll give you another chance otherwise you'll get your give with a golden bullet in between your eyes."

She gasped as I spun the barrel until I heard a click and slowly aimed the gun at CCP 1...2...3...
*Click* Nothing happen. CCP was still standing there shivering. As promised I let her lived but kept a close eye on her from that day on. The End.

Something Random
Gallente
The Barrow Boys
Posted - 2011.08.19 11:59:00 - [3]
 

Dont bother.

Charles Javeroux
Gallente
INTERSTELLAR CREDIT
Posted - 2011.08.19 12:42:00 - [4]
 

Originally by: Max Chee
reserved for part 2Razz

Originally by: Something Random
Dont bother.


Laughing Yea...instead spice up your story with some hot luve fantasy and it's gonna be a ladies bestseller.

Kaomond
Posted - 2011.08.19 13:29:00 - [5]
 

Originally by: Max Chee
last year on a faithful day I met


That phrased should be "on a fate filled day", it's wonderful how the human mind listens phonetically and fills in words with other words that sound right :D

(not meant as a dig, it's just that i've noticed lately that many people do this and don't realise they're doing it lol)

Tiven loves Tansien
Posted - 2011.08.19 13:44:00 - [6]
 

I just read the 5 first words of your stupid post and then saw all this wall text and hit reply.

Go away noob.

Sandwich PvP
Furian Necromongers
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:17:00 - [7]
 

Didn't read the troll....
However, unless your prepared to buy about ten GTC a month to help support all us freeloaders, you're really useless to the community, and should return to Hello kitty online.
Cool

Max Chee
StarFleet Enterprises
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:22:00 - [8]
 

*sigh* can't even write a simple story without getting bashed by the community and grammar police. What have the community come to?Sad

Velicitia
Gallente
Open Designs
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:29:00 - [9]
 

Edited by: Velicitia on 19/08/2011 14:30:52
Originally by: Kaomond
Originally by: Max Chee
last year on a faithful day I met


That phrased should be "on a fate filled day", it's wonderful how the human mind listens phonetically and fills in words with other words that sound right :D

(not meant as a dig, it's just that i've noticed lately that many people do this and don't realise they're doing it lol)


e.g. "intensive purposes" for "intents and purposes"


story seems OK (or at least it's better than *working* so...)

Marchocias
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:31:00 - [10]
 

Originally by: Velicitia
Originally by: Kaomond
Originally by: Max Chee
last year on a faithful day I met


That phrased should be "on a fate filled day", it's wonderful how the human mind listens phonetically and fills in words with other words that sound right :D

(not meant as a dig, it's just that i've noticed lately that many people do this and don't realise they're doing it lol)


e.g. perhaps "intensive purposes" for "intents and purposes"


OooooOoooooh.... My ears are alight!

Tiven loves Tansien
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:32:00 - [11]
 

Originally by: Max Chee
*sigh* can't even write a simple story without getting bashed by the community and grammar police. What have the community come to?Sad


ok just because you didnt start mocking us or try to insult us, it occured to me that you might be kinda nice irl

i promise i will read your story later, tonight

with love,
TIven

Mokokan
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:34:00 - [12]
 

HTFU and go ahead and write part two. You waitin' for a hug or somethin' ?

Max Chee
StarFleet Enterprises
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:36:00 - [13]
 

Originally by: Mokokan
HTFU and go ahead and write part two. You waitin' for a hug or somethin' ?


What's HTFU?

Mokokan
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:39:00 - [14]
 

Referring to "harden the f*** up". Something CCP came up with a while back.

Monstress
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:40:00 - [15]
 

Originally by: Max Chee
Originally by: Mokokan
HTFU and go ahead and write part two. You waitin' for a hug or somethin' ?


What's HTFU?


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VgvM7av1o1Q Laughing

Kro0k
Gallente
EVE Evacuation
Posted - 2011.08.19 14:43:00 - [16]
 

EVE is still a great community, the forums and general discussion on the other hand is full of whiny babies who want to play EVE Beta. My advice is stay aware from here if you want a warm welcome.

I liked the story, Welcome back

Max Chee
StarFleet Enterprises
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2011.08.19 15:00:00 - [17]
 

Originally by: Kro0k
EVE is still a great community, the forums and general discussion on the other hand is full of whiny babies who want to play EVE Beta. My advice is stay aware from here if you want a warm welcome.

I liked the story, Welcome back


Thanks for the first mature and proper commentRazz

Mokokan
Posted - 2011.08.19 16:19:00 - [18]
 

Originally by: Max Chee
Originally by: Kro0k
EVE is still a great community, the forums and general discussion on the other hand is full of whiny babies who want to play EVE Beta. My advice is stay aware from here if you want a warm welcome.

I liked the story, Welcome back


Thanks for the first mature and proper commentRazz


That's what I said, I just said it in Eve-forum-speak.Cool


Desert Ice78
Gryphon River Industries
R-I-P
Posted - 2011.08.19 16:56:00 - [19]
 

Originally by: Something Random
Dont bother.


QFT

Was trying to think of an apt reply, but was well and truely beaten to it....

Kaomond
Posted - 2011.08.20 01:14:00 - [20]
 

Originally by: Max Chee
*sigh* can't even write a simple story without getting bashed by the community and grammar police. What have the community come to?Sad


I'm not "bashing you", and it's nothing to do with grammar at all, it's to do with common sayings that over time people slowly change without realising it. I'm just trying to educate you to a common mistake people make. The story is good, it would be better if you just took constructive criticism the way it's meant, constructively. :D

Lazrim
Posted - 2011.08.20 01:30:00 - [21]
 

Keep going bro! Some people will like it some won't but welcome back nonetheless. It motivated me in fact to write a little lustful story of my own:
It was a dark and stormy night
and there was no homework in sight.
I quit Eve a few years back
after having biomassed my main in a sudden lack of tact.
I made a new account
and I went to rookie help.
I was sad and disillusioned amidst the 12 year olds shouts.
Where's the likes of Trinity Steele and SirMolle I wondered sadly,
and I nearly went to look at pron
but I didn't I mined Veldspar instead
The End

Ammzi
Posted - 2011.08.20 04:17:00 - [22]
 

I liked it ... creative.

Galalissa Noban
Posted - 2011.08.20 12:27:00 - [23]
 

tl;dr




 

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