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Hinata Kurai
Posted - 2011.05.06 17:55:00 - [1]
 

Well.... copy and paste from "General EvE" to here xD

Hello

As a relative new, but passionate player of EVE I found this game very inspiring from the very beginning. I was especially taken by the Caldari history and came up with an interesting story that I would like to share with you. I was wondering whether you would be intrested to hear more about the adventures of my main char Hinata Kurai.

As a german player I petitioned to a german GM and was told that there is no official german location that I could submit the story to. Would you be able to help me or at least direct me to the proper authority at CCP?

with kind regards

Lisa Franke aka Hinata Kurai

Kiandoshia
Posted - 2011.05.10 05:06:00 - [2]
 

Uhm, why can't you post it here?

Koronakesh
Amarr
Seekers of a Silent Paradise
Posted - 2011.05.10 21:45:00 - [3]
 

Presumably the story is written in german, so unless it's translated to english, it can't be posted on EVE-O. There's other places, though.

Korthan
Caldari
Pitch Black.
Shadow Cartel
Posted - 2011.05.11 07:08:00 - [4]
 

You can setup a free blog at blogspot.com and post it there in German.

Then just provide a link to it here on the forums =)

Mich würde interessieren zu lesen, was Sie geschrieben haben (I haven't spoken Deutsche in awhile sorry if it's off a bit <3)

Kiandoshia
Posted - 2011.05.12 12:35:00 - [5]
 

Originally by: Korthan
You can setup a free blog at blogspot.com and post it there in German.

Then just provide a link to it here on the forums =)

Mich würde interessieren zu lesen, was Sie geschrieben haben (I haven't spoken Deutsche in awhile sorry if it's off a bit <3)


This pretty much Very Happy

Hinata Kurai
Posted - 2011.05.13 21:13:00 - [6]
 

Oh well.... this is a pretty long story... ^^"
but I start to write it on Computer, I used a noticebook to write cause i habe no Laptop and i wantet to write while working ^^

Amaroq Dricaldari
Amarr
Vengeance Industrial Militia
Posted - 2011.05.25 06:43:00 - [7]
 

Just show us some text from it and I can translate it into English for you. I don't actually know German, but Bing Translator does help. It won't be the most accurate translation, but it might work.

Hinata Kurai
Posted - 2011.05.27 19:38:00 - [8]
 

Okay... I can write a little bit in german here to see if you guys are interestet... well...



Die Story ist noch nicht ganz fertig. Ich arbeite noch daran.

Hinata Kurai wachte nach dem Angriff der Gallente auf die Caldari in Ihrem Klon auf, aber irgendetwas stimmte mit der Datenübertragung der Erinnerungen auf den Klon nicht und so verlor sie ihr Gedächtnis. Der zuständige Laborant bekam Panik weil das noch nie passiert war und deshalb hat er ihr auch nichts sagen können über ihre herkunft oder ihren Namen. Er drückt ihr Klamotten und eine Brieftasche mit Lizenzen in die Hand und bittet sie zu gehen.
Sie setzt sich in eine Merlin und fliegt ziellos durch das All bis sie ein Wurmloch entdeckt.
Sie kennt sich damit nicht aus und fliegt rein und wird von den darin lebenden Sleepern überwältigt. Doch es befindet sich ein junger Mann namens Lex Moros in einer Hurricane in dem Wurmloch und hilft ihr. Er ist ein gesuchter Mörder. Einst war er in der Amarr Navy doch er hat einen wichtigen Handelsmann getötet, weil der ihm ein Schiff verkauft hat was voller Drogen war und darum verlor er seinen Platz in der Navy.

Lex kümmert sich um Hinata in der Hoffnung, dass sie ihr Gedächtnis irgendwann wiedererlangt.

Den mittelteil der geschichte habe ich noch nicht ganz fertig ...
aber später stellt sich heraus, dass Hinata bei der Caldari navy war und beim Angriff der Gallente getötet wurde, gleichzeitig ist sie eine Auftragsmörderin die kurz vor dem Angriff den befehl erhalten hat Lex zu töten.
Ihr könnt euch sicher denken, dass sie sich allerdings ineinander verlieben und so bla bla.

Der Rest der Geschichte ist noch in Arbeit. Vielleicht könnt ihr mir helfen?



Could you post the Translatet here in the Forum?

Calathea Sata
State War Academy
Posted - 2011.05.27 20:22:00 - [9]
 

From Google Translate.
Quote:
German - detected to English translation
The story is not finished yet. I'm still working on it.

Kurai Hinata woke up after the attack on the Gallente Caldari in your clone, but there was something wrong with the transfer of memories to the clone will not and so she lost her memory. The competent laboratory panicked because it was never happened before and so he can tell her anything about their origin or their name. He presses her clothes and a wallet with licenses in hand and asks her to leave.
She sits in a Merlin flying aimlessly through space until they discovered a worm hole.
She knows it is not, and flies in and is overpowered by the living therein Sleeper. But it is a young man named Lex Moros is in a hurricane in the worm hole and helps her. He is a wanted murderer. Once he was in the Amarr Navy but he has killed a major trader, because who sold him a boat which was full of drugs and therefore he lost his place in the Navy.

Lex takes care of Hinata in the hope that she regains her memory at some point.

The middle part of the story I have not quite finished ...
but later turns out that Hinata was at the Caldari Navy and was killed in the attack of the Gallente, while it is an assassin who has just before the attack, received the command to kill Lex.
You can probably imagine that they, however, fall in love and so bla bla.

The rest of the story is still under construction. Maybe you can help me?


 

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