| Author |
Topic |
Ceq Lysander
Caldari |
Posted - 2011.08.28 15:18:00 - [ 4921]
PrincesseVera - Simple, quite pretty, somewhat too pale though: 7/10. |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
Amarr |
Posted - 2011.08.28 19:46:00 - [ 4922]
 Originally by: Ceq Lysander
PrincesseVera - Simple, quite pretty, somewhat too pale though: 7/10.
Nice composition, nice lighting, as usual it's a bit difficult to tell what the face expression means actually, but it's nice. 8/10. |
Cynter DeVries
Caldari |
Posted - 2011.08.29 04:18:00 - [ 4923]
7/10 : Good expression, unique visage, need a bit of work on the eyebrows |
Si'Andregal Grungolash |
Posted - 2011.08.29 05:12:00 - [ 4924]
Cynter DeVries
6/10
Pose is okay, somewhat seductive.
Breast size uncomfortably large to the point of grotesque. A composition with blatant emphasis on the breast becomes corny.
Lighting and facial structure makes character appear flat faced and hollow cheeked.
Not sure if the background compliments the character. |
iKill Giants
Eternal Phoenix Rises |
Posted - 2011.08.29 05:17:00 - [ 4925]
7.5/10
Effectively expresses emotion, but overdoes it with the lighting. Subtlety is the key. |
Sterling Severasse |
Posted - 2011.08.29 06:41:00 - [ 4926]
@ iKill Giants
That is how a Minmatar pilot should look. Scorned, hardy and you couldn't have chosen better apparel.
The background, however, is bland and off tilts the symmetry sucking much of the appeal out of the overall portrait.
7.5/10 |
Flamespar |
Posted - 2011.08.29 06:51:00 - [ 4927]
@Sterling Severasse
Bit dark and character seems far away. Either that or you head is small.
5/10
(Unless you actually have a shruken head, in which case I give you 9/10 for not letting your disability getting the way of your gaming. Bless you little soldier.) |
Shizu Eisenkreuz
Minmatar
Republic Military School |
Posted - 2011.08.29 07:36:00 - [ 4928]
Originally by: Flamespar
Boring thug look. Not bad, but nothing special. 6/10 |
Si'Andregal Grungolash |
Posted - 2011.08.29 09:13:00 - [ 4929]
Shizu Eisenkreuz
7/10
I can recognize the effect you're aiming to achieve by placing the eyeline where the streak of light is. The result would certainly be effective however the composition throws the balance of the image, The composition would have benefited from the character filling up more of the vertical space. Unfortunately the BG cannot be adjusted and the intended effect would not be the same.
I am not sure the stark colour contrast actually is the best choice. Sometimes a closer colour palette pulls the image off better.
I do admire your character, your choice of clothing and hairstyle is well made. |
bigboyal
Brutor Tribe
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Posted - 2011.08.29 09:48:00 - [ 4930]
Not sure about the shiny forehead - 6/10
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Poetic Stanziel
Gallente
Macbeth Transport and Freight LLC
|
Posted - 2011.08.29 10:19:00 - [ 4931]
BigBoyal - You have something in your eye. A bland pose. And nothing about the character that shouts any originality. 5/10. |
Si'Andregal Grungolash |
Posted - 2011.08.29 11:38:00 - [ 4932]
Originally by: Poetic Stanziel
BigBoyal - You have something in your eye. A bland pose. And nothing about the character that shouts any originality. 5/10.
7/10 Frankly, the neck looks broken. It's a very unnatural position for the neck, less tilt may solve the problem. I'm sorry but I really do not think you have that pose right, and it's very noticeable, at least for me. Otherwise, a fine minmatar girl. |
Khazarn Areth |
Posted - 2011.08.29 11:49:00 - [ 4933]
Edited by: Khazarn Areth on 29/08/2011 11:53:36
8/9
Dark, brooding, militaristic
Quite a good look in my opinion |
Poetic Stanziel
Gallente
Macbeth Transport and Freight LLC
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Posted - 2011.08.29 12:38:00 - [ 4934]
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
Amarr |
Posted - 2011.08.29 12:48:00 - [ 4935]
Originally by: Poetic Stanziel
Nice features, splendid eyes, but the pose is too unnatural, my neck hurts just to see it. A bit less tilt to the left will make for a more natural pose, and I would defintively give a try to tilting the head a bit to the back, maybe until the chin aligns to the neck of the clothes. 7/10 because of the unnatural pose. |
Si'Andregal Grungolash |
Posted - 2011.08.29 13:46:00 - [ 4936]
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
8.5/10
Very admirable woman you present yourself as, she has class and seems charismatic, and can be seen to be knowledgeable and experienced.
Composition and pose is also good.
Expression is a bit hard to decipher, there is a slight hint of a smile, yet she seems disengaged. Eyes are focused downwards which is always a bit strange, she appears to be day dreaming, oblivious to her surroundings. Though I generally don't recommend it, it may work to have her directly engage the viewer.
The background is good, however I think a more detailed "solid" background would be more suitable over a wispy smoke background, but I won't know until I see it. |
Aqualonda
Minmatar
Narabedla |
Posted - 2011.08.29 20:52:00 - [ 4937]
Very nice! I like the pose and the lighting, though it's perhaps a bit too dark. 8/10 |
Lana leng
Caldari
Neandertal Rising |
Posted - 2011.08.29 22:13:00 - [ 4938]
Very nice asian style, but I'm not sure about the color of the eye make-up. 7/10 |
Victoria Blake |
Posted - 2011.08.30 15:20:00 - [ 4939]
7/10
Please be careful around magnets. Just pullin your leg. |
Scortched Merc |
Posted - 2011.08.30 16:14:00 - [ 4940]
[Victoria Blake]
Sweet and hopefully not so innocent... want some candy? 8/10 |
Holznar'ar Eoner |
Posted - 2011.08.30 16:40:00 - [ 4941]
Edited by: Holznar''ar Eoner on 30/08/2011 16:41:22
Scortched Merc
Determined. Glasgow Grin is a reminder of payback will be a *itch.
Edit: 8/10 |
Vana Dell
Caldari
A Big Enough Lever
Numquam Ambulare Solus |
Posted - 2011.08.30 17:05:00 - [ 4942]
Bandit underling. Nice background. (6/10) |
Dee Luxx
Gallente |
Posted - 2011.08.30 20:24:00 - [ 4943]
Nice lighting. Could use a bit of makeup to accent the eyes but that's just me talking.  7/10 |
Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
Amarr |
Posted - 2011.08.30 20:38:00 - [ 4944]
Edited by: Ishtanchuk Fazmarai on 30/08/2011 20:40:21 Originally by: Dee Luxx
Woaaah, absolutely gorgeous!  GREAT make-up, nice features, good hairdo... just get rid of those silly tattoos and you'll be 10/10!!! 9/10 because of silly tattoos. PS: what's the base of that purple? Have been looking for purple/violet eye shadow and never found it... |
Mai Kusoni |
Posted - 2011.08.30 22:45:00 - [ 4945]
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Dee Luxx
Gallente |
Posted - 2011.08.30 22:48:00 - [ 4946]
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LtCol Laurentius
Caldari
Digital Fury Corporation
Northern Coalition. |
Posted - 2011.08.31 00:22:00 - [ 4947]
8/10. Very nice eyes and face, but a bit too glossy on the make-up side. Its a cold, harsh place out there  |
Rhynn Izo
Caldari
Banzai Institute for Advanced Warfare and Tactics
|
Posted - 2011.08.31 03:21:00 - [ 4948]
7/10 not that bad, good Light positioning |
Jith |
Posted - 2011.08.31 03:40:00 - [ 4949]
Like it 7/10 |
Richard Aiel
Caldari
Umbra Exitium
Order Of The Unforgiving |
Posted - 2011.08.31 03:48:00 - [ 4950]
Edited by: Richard Aiel on 31/08/2011 03:48:15 Originally by: Jith
Like it 7/10
Whered I drop that contact lense oh damn wrong thread s'cool, 5/10 |
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