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CCP Abraxas

Posted - 2007.08.13 15:47:00 - [1]
 

Today's story is about the Aura AI, which you encounter every time you log on to EVE, and about poetry, which you do not. Given the vociferous discussion on my narrative techniques on the last published piece, I'll add that this one, too, has a definite point to its structure and flow.

And in two weeks' time, if everything goes well, we start with Black Mountain.

Malachi Nefzen
Caldari
Insane Decision
Anarchy.
Posted - 2007.08.13 16:13:00 - [2]
 

aura's face looks pretty young for a women aged beyond her years

zomg

good stuff

Devilish Ledoux
Caldari
GoonWaffe
Goonswarm Federation
Posted - 2007.08.13 17:31:00 - [3]
 

Very good stuff. You keep writing, I'll keep reading.

SonOTassadar
Dreddit
Test Alliance Please Ignore
Posted - 2007.08.13 17:32:00 - [4]
 

Bad as hell. Cool

jattell
Gallente
Celestial Horizon Corp.
United Corporate Ventures
Posted - 2007.08.13 17:32:00 - [5]
 

The story's are getting better and better.

Keep on writing !

ThaMa Gebir
Gallente
SUECHTLER Inc.
Saints Amongst Sinners
Posted - 2007.08.13 17:56:00 - [6]
 

Abraxas, once again you astound me, your writing is more flexible than a rubber band.

You have surprised me, and outdone yourself another time. Well done and thank you.

Grimpak
Gallente
Midnight Elites
Echelon Rising
Posted - 2007.08.13 17:57:00 - [7]
 

now THAT'S a cool one.

WGAnubis Marrith
Gallente
Posted - 2007.08.13 18:01:00 - [8]
 

Very well done. By chance are you going to do another story, perhaps about Kaoli and his reactions to what happened when Excena released her translation and the following events?

Dred 'Morte
New European Regiment
Blade.
Posted - 2007.08.13 18:22:00 - [9]
 

Edited by: Dred ''Morte on 13/08/2007 18:24:27
LoL I wasn't expecting this one Very Happy Very nice!

When should we expect the ending of the 3 part story Summer Breeze and Winter Came When You Were Away?

FrostedJin
Caldari
Perkone
Posted - 2007.08.13 18:30:00 - [10]
 

Excellent Work.

Salvis Tallan
Gallente
Sparse Enterprises
Posted - 2007.08.13 19:07:00 - [11]
 

I loved this one. Very well done, and a great read!

Bobaflex Doomwalker
Gallente
Conclave United
Posted - 2007.08.13 19:41:00 - [12]
 

Abso-fricking-lutely excellent.

Tajidan
Muppet Ninja's
Ninja Unicorns with Huge Horns
Posted - 2007.08.13 19:42:00 - [13]
 

hmmm, what bothers me especially in this chronicle is; the illustrations look more and more the same like WoW and let's say "standard" cg illustrations. i enjoyed the rough and and dark style of vitoc, aurora or the methods of torture for example, much much more. while i'm aware that every illustrator got his very own style i regret the cartoonization of the last ones. Confused


Victor Valka
Caldari
The Kairos Syndicate
Transmission Lost
Posted - 2007.08.13 19:57:00 - [14]
 


Mardonius
Gallente
GRAIL KEEPERS
Posted - 2007.08.13 20:08:00 - [15]
 

As always, a great read. I loved the the style and pacing of this chronicle.

My only criticism would be that the ending of Excena's biography, explaining how she was offered the task of recording voiceovers for the AI on capsuleer ships seemed like a bit of an anticlimax. I would imagine that such a mundane task of voice-recording would be below such an individual, especially one with such an artistic character and religious sensibilities. It didn't seem to add up to me. Essentially, the character in the chronicle became too large for her presence in-game.

I am being unfair? Have I got the wrong end of the stick? Or is this simply on of the many valid ways of interpreting this work?

Fehnrail
Caldari
The Day Watch
Posted - 2007.08.13 20:54:00 - [16]
 

This piece itself is a masterful poem.

Or at least, I perceive it as such.

Well done.

Taes Valkiir
Caldari
Ghost Festival
Posted - 2007.08.13 21:10:00 - [17]
 

Excellent. Perfect intersection with the EVE 'verse.

Freki Grimnir
Minmatar
The Plexus Syndicate
The Order of New Eden
Posted - 2007.08.13 21:22:00 - [18]
 

Abraxas. As a writer myself I was one of the critics of the reverse chronology in Summer Breeze - I said it didn't work for me. No such reaction this time, this was simply perfect.

Barah expressed some really thought provoking sentiments but I disagree with him on one - I think a poet can be a Chronicler. Or, based on this, maybe I should that a Chronicler can be a poet. Beautiful work.


wiggyman
Caldari
Gallentean Industry Syndicate
Posted - 2007.08.13 22:10:00 - [19]
 

This is one the best chronicles i've read.
keep them up.

Gaige Gamba
Gallente
The Scope
Posted - 2007.08.13 22:11:00 - [20]
 

If this game had nothing good going for it, I'd still come back for the chronicles.

The chronicles and the depth they give to the EVE verse bring this game so many levels higher than any other.

Isoc Krell
Posted - 2007.08.13 22:17:00 - [21]
 

In the immortal words of Paul Harvey:

"And now you know... the rest of the story!"Very Happy

Imperial Auror
Caldari
Deep Core Mining Inc.
Posted - 2007.08.13 23:33:00 - [22]
 

This is a literature-class piece of work. The concepts entwined in it are thought provoking at a level beyond that of merely the game, though the setting of EVE soul is wonderfully worked into a crucible for the story.

Poet Abraxas! I look forward attentively to your next offering :)



Ma Raia'l
Amarr
PIE Inc.
Posted - 2007.08.14 00:04:00 - [23]
 

Huzzah! More material for Amarrian RP Very Happy

TornSoul
BIG
Gentlemen's Agreement
Posted - 2007.08.14 00:45:00 - [24]
 

Originally by: Taes Valkiir
Excellent. Perfect intersection with the EVE 'verse.


QFT.

I do love those.

Add's that extra bit of deepth, to something you really havent given much of a thought before (at least in my case).

And - Which dont *need* it either, to do their function.

That voice could have been "that voice" forever, and EVE would be the same.

Not anymore.

I love those stories Razz



Bob Niac
Gallente
freelancers inc
Imperial 0rder
Posted - 2007.08.14 01:45:00 - [25]
 

......

Wow.


Truly epic.

Cyriel Longinus
Caldari
XERCORE
Posted - 2007.08.14 06:07:00 - [26]
 

I got chills while reading it. Good stuff.

Typhado3
Minmatar
Posted - 2007.08.14 07:05:00 - [27]
 

very nice =) love reading the chronicles in here, and the ones that intersect with gameplay are some of my fav.

one question though.... what happens in "Cathedral of the oceans"/"The book of hours"????

Maze La'Zie
Sons Of 0din
C0NVICTED
Posted - 2007.08.14 09:01:00 - [28]
 

Fantastic! \o/

xxFireBirdxx
Posted - 2007.08.14 09:28:00 - [29]
 

I like the story, nice one! Smile

Admus
Bath and Body Works
S I L E N T.
Posted - 2007.08.14 09:47:00 - [30]
 

That was terrific. Excellent flow and style. I quite enjoyed it.

Yet another reason why Eve sets itself far above the rest.


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