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Tonkin
Sacred Templars
RED.OverLord
Posted - 2007.03.15 00:28:00 - [1]
 

Edited by: Tonkin on 17/03/2007 04:36:56
Edited by: Tonkin on 15/03/2007 00:24:26
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vid of black lance. put together with a few roaming gangs and a allince op.

contains strong language in the music so if you very sensative person DONT WATCH

there a few spelling mistakes which i only noticed after i did the rendering, i aint rendering it again, 6 hours it took.

this is my FIRST ever vid so im still a noob using acdobe and gathering fraps footage.

comments would help me make the next one better


580 meg heres the link, enjoy my vid!
BLACK LANCE VID

dalman
TunDraGon
Pandemic Legion
Posted - 2007.03.15 00:42:00 - [2]
 

Edited by: dalman on 15/03/2007 02:08:20
Eeek, nerf your oversized banner and I'll watch it.

*edit* Watched it anyway...

And tbh it's way too ganktastic.
The editing and so on is rly nice (at least for a first movie), but the fights just aren't interesting.

Tonkin
Sacred Templars
RED.OverLord
Posted - 2007.03.15 00:49:00 - [3]
 

Originally by: dalman
Eeek, nerf your oversized banner and I'll watch it.


sory dude, i got a 22inch widescreen monitor it looked fine,

hehe dunno how i could shrink it robbed it of one of my corp matesShocked

Shadowfax2121
Gallente
Black Lance
Posted - 2007.03.15 01:01:00 - [4]
 

Yarr

Brisi
Caldari
Posted - 2007.03.15 02:04:00 - [5]
 

A few comments from me.

Firstly, your editing and music choices are great. It's nicely edited together, and you give us little remarks regarding what's going on. Intro was a bit long in my opinion, but that's a minor detail. Good job overall.

However, as with so many, many movies here, your movie lacks interresting fights. Boom gank, boom gank, boom capital ship, boom gank. I'm sorry, but people see enough lone Myrmidons being ganked by 22 ceptors/Hacs as it is, it's just not movie-material. And ofcourse you write, that the big gang that was just there left him alone to die, and while that may be true, it doesn't matter to the rest of us. I actually fast-forwarded through most of it Sad

Anyway, as you say it's your first movie, and trust me I know good fights just don't come along 20 times a day. But my advise is that you are more selective in what material you put in your next one. Don't just put any random cruiser gank in there, simply because you have it on fraps. Quality > Quantity by a long shot, and I'd rather watch 7 mins of great fights, than 25 mins of fluff.

Don't be discouraged though, it's all meant as construtive. Hope it shows Smile

Oh, and fix that banner Razz

Dr Nightmare
Beastmode.
Posted - 2007.03.15 02:36:00 - [6]
 

I guess it was good for a first timer, the editing was nice.

1) Music didnt do it for
2) Ganking Velators FTL
3) Needs more interesting stuff

The film with Evil Thug's titan was pretty much the main "attraction" in this video. During that fight you guys killed a carier and dread, but tbh I was looking at the titan half the fight.

Overall 6/10 for a first time vid.
gJ

Sephirot
Minmatar
Black Lance
Posted - 2007.03.15 03:13:00 - [7]
 

Very nicely done ,loved the editing.

Keep it up m8.

/Seph

Aymo Bjorn
Rionnag Alba
Against ALL Authorities
Posted - 2007.03.15 04:47:00 - [8]
 

Great stuff, Tonk! I thought the music and editing were great. And i don't know what these guys are talking about saying there wasn't enough content -- maybe they missed the titan...

-aymo

John MacCoy
Amarr
Viziam
Posted - 2007.03.15 04:48:00 - [9]
 

Yeah its a cool movie. Good editing and good music (you gotta love the halo soundtrack) but I've just gotta pick one thing that wrong. I you catch us with our pants down on the carrier kill but I was not willing to warp in a 35 man fleet of Tech2 fitted battleships to a titan with Evil Thug itch to press the button with the "Big Boom!"

But the one thing that really annoys me is that we are not a bobbett alliance. We have not standing with them nor with coalition. Just dont like being branded something we are not.

Otherwise really good movie.

Syath
Caldari
Einherjar Rising
Cry Havoc.
Posted - 2007.03.15 06:17:00 - [10]
 

omg i hate the eve d/ler its freaking so slow!!! ahhhh i have FIOS what is with this slow downloading!

The Beatnuts
UA Industry
Red Alliance
Posted - 2007.03.15 09:57:00 - [11]
 

Originally by: Dr Nightmare
I guess it was good for a first timer, the editing was nice.

1) Music didnt do it for
2) Ganking Velators FTL
3) Needs more interesting stuff

The film with Evil Thug's titan was pretty much the main "attraction" in this video. During that fight you guys killed a carier and dread, but tbh I was looking at the titan half the fight.

Overall 6/10 for a first time vid.
gJ


think we have someone who will soon release some rly nice footage of that titan

Liet Traep
Minmatar
Dark-Rising
IT Alliance
Posted - 2007.03.16 06:12:00 - [12]
 

I liked it. There's something missing though.... Hmm, oh yes me! Put me in the next one! It'll be movie magic!

Opan santel
Gallente
Turbulent
Posted - 2007.03.16 06:50:00 - [13]
 

I'm loving it, loving it very much. Nice edit going on to. TMPL ftw yaaaaarrrrrr!!!!1111oneone *cough

Doktor Soet
Wrath of Fenris
Posted - 2007.03.16 07:54:00 - [14]
 

TMPL Banner smaller

@ tonkin: banner a bit smaller. should fit better for e-o forum ;)

Ace Frehley
Minmatar
Mercenaries of Andosia
Northern Coalition.
Posted - 2007.03.16 13:58:00 - [15]
 

oh a black lance- wounder if i star in it... Im usually in a skincolored ship YARRRR!!

ollymac
Gallente
Aliastra
Posted - 2007.03.16 14:26:00 - [16]
 

i loved the music u use m8 and the editing was first rate
and what a classic to end it with yarrrage
i hope to c more of yur fraps m8 as u can only get bigger and better
fights from here and they mean much better fraps Very HappyVery HappyVery Happy
to hush up justa few critics Twisted Evil

WackyRMa
Caldari
Black Lance
Posted - 2007.03.16 19:45:00 - [17]
 

For more great Black-lance vids, check http://www.black-lance.com/vids/


Andargor theWise
Collateral Damage Unlimited
Posted - 2007.03.16 21:20:00 - [18]
 

Edited by: Andargor theWise on 17/03/2007 03:37:03

Can't wait to see it. After a long slugging match against our adversaries, ET jumping in on top of them w/friends was definitely a highlight of my weekend.

Respect to all. o7

EDIT: Nicely done. I'm right at the top of your overview, taking pot shots at the dread. Shocked Didn't get on the KM though... Sad

Tonkin
Sacred Templars
RED.OverLord
Posted - 2007.03.17 04:42:00 - [19]
 

Originally by: Doktor Soet
TMPL Banner smaller

@ tonkin: banner a bit smaller. should fit better for e-o forum ;)



thanks mate updated it

Orin Fatch
Posted - 2007.03.17 10:54:00 - [20]
 

Nice work mate, keep it up!

Bailian Moxtain
NibbleTek
Pandemic Legion
Posted - 2007.03.17 14:16:00 - [21]
 

try not to be 20 vs 1 on the next vid

AnarkiTheStorm
Primary..
Posted - 2007.03.17 14:34:00 - [22]
 

agree with bailian, we also didnt have 3 times your number...

30 Cartel
30 of the Fm pps
and 30 of you douches

aggro
Minmatar
devil's reborn
Posted - 2007.03.18 00:42:00 - [23]
 

very good quality graphics and good editing.

must be some machine you are running tonkin to get that quality

8/10 i say


Trinity Faetal
Gallente
Little Garden
Posted - 2007.03.18 04:00:00 - [24]
 

a lot of smack in local, a lot of unnecessary profanity in the song lyrics, a lot of ganking followed by smack, annoying editing the whole video was blurry at some parts. and at some point it would just stop no vid or audio, omfg your killing noobships, learn to play!, 600MB wtf is this lotr part 4.

this movie sucks.

Razz

Betty Rubble
Caldari
The Collective
Against ALL Authorities
Posted - 2007.03.18 08:25:00 - [25]
 

Nice! I liked it :)

Thut'ankh Amon
Viziam
Posted - 2007.03.18 08:45:00 - [26]
 

Editing was nice, i liked the music, but as for the fights ive seen only ganks, oh and erebus looks cool

Oscar Fedora
Loving Pirates
Imperial 0rder
Posted - 2007.03.18 22:06:00 - [27]
 

Edited by: Oscar Fedora on 18/03/2007 22:14:52

Originally by: AnarkiTheStorm
agree with bailian, we also didnt have 3 times your number...

30 Cartel
30 of the Fm pps
and 30 of you douches


uhm so...we didn't run!!!

ohw btw check my banner :) isn't it lovely :P

very nice movie..are you sure it's your first time :)

Tonkin
Sacred Templars
RED.OverLord
Posted - 2007.03.19 03:52:00 - [28]
 

yea defo first, vid, and guys it was only on weeks worth of fraps, up to now i have collected 200 gig more of fraps, and alot of 1v1 stuff. now om working out on a new intro, ive seen more videos from the forums and found more editing techs i want to try out.

next one will be a month away


and talking about ganks, in 0.0 thats what is normally there getting people off guard.

only in low sec where u get the best 1v1sTwisted Evil

and with the velator i thought that was comedy hehee,

RiotRick
Kamehameha I's Revenge
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2007.03.19 08:33:00 - [29]
 

Great video. I really liked the editing and the music you put into it. And I'm in it as well Cool Even though my myrmidon went down fast :p

Bailian Moxtain
NibbleTek
Pandemic Legion
Posted - 2007.03.20 15:59:00 - [30]
 

U all die fast. Thats why u allways need blobs to kill us WinkRolling Eyes


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