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CCP Abraxas

Posted - 2006.11.27 16:54:00 - [1]
 

This week's chronicle is titled "Fedo Song" and deals with ship rigs. As it's a non-linear horror story told by a fairly unreliable narrator, I'm going to cheat and post the proper scene sequence. If you finish the chronicle and still have no idea what happened, you can re-order the scenes for added clarity, although I contend that the story retains much of its power only when read in its original, scrambled form.

The sequence is 20, 14, 1, 9, 7, 3, 12, 5, 11, 17, 6, 16, 13, 8, 4, 10, 2, 19, 15, 18.

Victor Valka
Caldari
The Kairos Syndicate
Transmission Lost
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:01:00 - [2]
 

Oooo... Shocked

First-like!

Vazroth
Gallente
Quasar Consortium
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:05:00 - [3]
 

Nice One.. Very Happy

DHU InMe
Gallente
Corsairs Inc.
The Spire Collective
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:08:00 - [4]
 

ha....... Blood nose.



HeadAche :-#

Shiner BockBeer
Go Go Gadget ForumPostingAlt
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:10:00 - [5]
 

Ewww!

Good one.

Verone
Gallente
Veto Corp
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:13:00 - [6]
 


Outstanding Cool


Roshan longshot
Gallente
Ordos Humanitas
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:15:00 - [7]
 

Ok this one was just strange...






Scagga Laebetrovo
Failure Assured
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:16:00 - [8]
 

quality.

Maze La'Zie
Sons Of 0din
C0NVICTED
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:22:00 - [9]
 

Fantastic.

I like.

Quakefire
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:23:00 - [10]
 

I quite enjoyed that, I love how you read and read and read and then at the end everything clicks together. Abraxas like most good horror type writers, you kinda worry me

keepiru
Omega Fleet Enterprises
Executive Outcomes
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:35:00 - [11]
 

ShockedSurprised

Nice chron!

Erikel
Cosmic Odyssey
BricK sQuAD.
Posted - 2006.11.27 17:41:00 - [12]
 

Excellent!! I want more now!Very Happy

CCP kieron

Posted - 2006.11.27 17:49:00 - [13]
 

Am I the only one to be slightly disturbed by part 19? Just let your mind wander a bit. *shivers*

defiler
Mad Hermit
Wayward Alliance
Posted - 2006.11.27 18:11:00 - [14]
 

Originally by: kieron
Am I the only one to be slightly disturbed by part 19? Just let your mind wander a bit. *shivers*

Don't go there Shocked

Zaphroid Eulthran
Minmatar
Imperial Visions
Posted - 2006.11.27 18:15:00 - [15]
 

Edited by: Zaphroid Eulthran on 27/11/2006 18:19:22
Originally by: kieron
Am I the only one to be slightly disturbed by part 19? Just let your mind wander a bit. *shivers*



oh great, now I have to go back and count them to work out which part you are talking about...Confused

Edit. You sir, have one dirty little mind.Shocked

I was quite surprised to find that this story does work quite well in scrambled form and that at the end (and only at the end) I find out what was going on.

Good one.

Tommy TenKreds
Animal Mercantile Executive
Posted - 2006.11.27 18:18:00 - [16]
 

Great stuff! Nice one Abraxas.

"Careful with that rig Eugene...!"

Akela
Caldari
Posted - 2006.11.27 18:20:00 - [17]
 

Originally by: Tommy TenKreds
G
"Careful with that rig Eugene...!"



Wow! are YOU old?!?!....er wait Wink

SonOTassadar
Dreddit
Test Alliance Please Ignore
Posted - 2006.11.27 18:33:00 - [18]
 

I don't know what happenedConfused

Verus Potestas
Caldari
SP4RTANS
Tactical Narcotics Team
Posted - 2006.11.27 19:00:00 - [19]
 

You had to wait until Benco was away before doing this didn't you? Razz

Kylania
Gallente
Phoenix Industries
Sylph Alliance
Posted - 2006.11.27 19:03:00 - [20]
 

Umm... ShockedNeutral

Great work, but I feel dirty. Now, where did I put that fedo...

Mebrithiel Ju'wien
Moira.
Posted - 2006.11.27 19:10:00 - [21]
 

Cute little stinky Fedos! Embarassed

I'm gonna hug em and squeeze em and throw them to the Gallente.

Nybbas
Guiding Hand Social Club
Dystopia Alliance
Posted - 2006.11.27 19:27:00 - [22]
 

Are you sure you listed the 20 sections in the correct order? amazing story by the way!

Xrak
Pat Sharp's Potato Rodeo
Wildly Inappropriate.
Posted - 2006.11.27 19:37:00 - [23]
 

Where is Benco?

Kyoko Sakoda
Caldari
Veto.
Veto Corp
Posted - 2006.11.27 19:46:00 - [24]
 

Good story! Fedos are cyuuuute. Embarassed

BillyBong2
Amarr
3OO
WE FORM VOLTRON
Posted - 2006.11.27 20:38:00 - [25]
 

printed it out and cut it up so that I could rearrange it in the correct sequence.

what the heck happened? Twisted Evil

Irrilian
EVE University
Ivy League
Posted - 2006.11.27 20:41:00 - [26]
 

Originally by: Xrak
Where is Benco?


Indeed. He's in Barcelona still I think.

Shintoko Akahoshi
Risen Angels
Posted - 2006.11.27 21:31:00 - [27]
 

I'll never look at a fedo the same way, again...Embarassed

Constantine Arcanum
Bad Company DBD
Initiative Mercenaries
Posted - 2006.11.27 22:10:00 - [28]
 

MY GOD KEEP THIS AWAY FROM BENCO97!!!!!


Gariuys
Evil Strangers Inc.
Posted - 2006.11.27 22:30:00 - [29]
 

Originally by: kieron
Am I the only one to be slightly disturbed by part 19? Just let your mind wander a bit. *shivers*



Yes, cause you're used to CCP, the rest of us are extremely disturbed by part 19, and mediumly disturbed by the rest.

Still good stuff though. :-D

Kazuma Saruwatari
Posted - 2006.11.27 23:12:00 - [30]
 

it takes one to know one. Great underlying meaning btw, fitting for the Amarr, and even I dare say some RL fanatics.

Deep, real deep. Greatness.Cool


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