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Posted - 2003.09.01 12:04:00 - [1]

i dont have good grammer or am i writter but here goes nothing

a convoy of 1 badger and 3 condors was travleing throgh deep space your story take place on the badger (the glutness) (we should all know they have a crew of 150) caption joun smith was looking at a small locket of his lover ,then the almarm went off the confusing bam der bam ringing in his head adimal lokie saying over the speaker all hands batale stations joun russed to the ships only gun the 3 condors were distord he shot they were bantums guristes 4 of them he manged to take out 2 when the ship started to break he rused to the nearest capsle the ship broke in to two luckly he got in his capsle the nearest sation was 10 sysems away he made it
20 years later since the gerista had gammed all com links between this dam deep space sation and the regular world and trale was inpasable he couldent go back to sevilation
to his love he had become a miner made enaof money he started his own corp 10 polits thay all had moa's they disided to go back to cadri space they set off on ther long gurney a total of 50 jumps after ten jumps they came two 2 curiers witch admetly fired they killed them both capsles and all this seemd to happen more and more after the skimish but they evently got back only to find his lover had found some won elese he set off mineing once again

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Posted - 2003.09.02 11:37:00 - [2]

Dude thats tragic, couldnt you think of some kind of a happy ending? Whats also tragic is your spelling, run that through a spellchecker next time ok? You have good talent and creativity keep up the good work!Very Happy

Posted - 2003.09.02 20:42:00 - [3]

ill try the spellcheaker

Posted - 2003.09.02 20:44:00 - [4]

Sadthe reson for the sad story ive been through tuff times (best way to put it)


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