open All Channels
seplocked Intergalactic Summit
blankseplocked Short Bus Pole Dancers declares war on IPI
 
This thread is older than 90 days and has been locked due to inactivity.


 
Author Topic

Sun Zue
Short Bus Pole Dancers
Posted - 2011.08.08 10:39:00 - [1]
 

Edited by: Sun Zue on 08/08/2011 13:03:21
Due to the nature of the conflict between the Gallente and the Caldari some independent Alliances have taken it upon themselves to take sides. This will not do and will not be accepted. IPI has been observed aiding known enemies of the State, most of all IRED. As the IPI and other major alliances/corps wish to stand in the way of Caldari progress, as of 8-5-113. We will work with Hells Revenge to purge this blight from Placid so to open the door to true Caldari conquest. I can only hope that you can keep us entertained and learn the hard reality that we who spill blood as ordered by the State go through.


Director SBPD
Sun Zue

Tigerfish Torpedo
Underworld Protection Agency
Fatal Ascension
Posted - 2011.08.08 10:50:00 - [2]
 

Fascinating post, Mr Zue, but for the rest of the IGS, I feel the need to clarify a few minor points that affects the overall professionalism of your statement.

Firstly, I believe you mean 'Due to the nature...', instead of 'Do to the nature'.

Secondly, I'm fairly certain you were going for '... will not be accepted', as opposed to excepted.

Finally, I'm not sure, but I suspect you were aiming to say a 'major corp within ILF'. ‘Within’ is one word when used in such a context.

Regards,

Tigerfish.

Sun Zue
Short Bus Pole Dancers
Posted - 2011.08.08 13:17:00 - [3]
 

Edited by: Sun Zue on 08/08/2011 13:17:18
Originally by: Tigerfish Torpedo
Fascinating post, Mr Zue, but for the rest of the IGS, I feel the need to clarify a few minor points that affects the overall professionalism of your statement.

Firstly, I believe you mean 'Due to the nature...', instead of 'Do to the nature'.

Secondly, I'm fairly certain you were going for '... will not be accepted', as opposed to excepted.

Finally, I'm not sure, but I suspect you were aiming to say a 'major corp within ILF'. ‘Within’ is one word when used in such a context.

Regards,

Tigerfish.



Thank you mister grammar police. After a case of Zydrine Wine and waking naked in the hallway of the wrong station, putting together a proper sentence was low on the list. Well at least the spelling was right, now I must find where I parked my Hurricane.......I swear it was in the hanger last night.

Tigerfish Torpedo
Underworld Protection Agency
Fatal Ascension
Posted - 2011.08.08 13:32:00 - [4]
 

Originally by: Sun Zue
I swear it was in the hanger last night.


I'll resist the temptation of pointing out that it's actually ‘hangar’.

Regardless, you're quite welcome.

Tigerfish.


 

This thread is older than 90 days and has been locked due to inactivity.


 


The new forums are live

Please adjust your bookmarks to https://forums.eveonline.com

These forums are archived and read-only