Posted - 2011.06.10 10:55:00 - [31]

 

Originally by: Wensley

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University bandwidth FTW in the end.

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I actually mkv'd this out of curiosity - resulted in a 42% decrease in size (815M). shame it would take too long to upload. All mach is good mach though, hopefully we'll get more :)

Posted - 2011.06.10 23:06:00 - [33]

 

I have to agree with Zach and Wensley: it wasn't thrilling to watch.

+ Bonus points for using a Machariel.

+ Most clips are good/decent

+ Pretty much no horrible gank clips.

+ Signing Dramiel

- Stop going into scram/web range! It happens in almost every single clip. The first fight in particular was like watching a car crash in slow motion. I saw the Thrasher and Cyclone rush you from over 30k and you didn't react at all. Especially in the first few clips, you're flying that machariel like a megathron. After 5-6 minutes I didn't bother facepalming anymore, I just left my hand on my face.

- As Zach said, the music choice was disappointing. Try to stick to a single genre or to songs that sound well together, some of the transitions between songs were painful! Quite a lot of the songs you picked have been used in other videos. At 21:30, Mitternacht along with the zoom on your modules and the slow motion effect really feels like you are trying to imitate Garmonation 8.

- Why did you not show the end of the "Mach vs Arbitrator and Dominix" clip? Seeing how it cuts right when you went into scram range, looks like you died and you don't want to show it. Either don't show a clip or show it entirely, don't cut it right when it's getting interesting!

- The action is too slow, speed it up a bit more in Vegas.

- The credits are way too long.

- The comments were a bit hard to read while watching, probably because they're in an awkward spot.

- The file size is huge!

I know that's a lot of negative stuff, but I'm saying this constructively. Most of the things I said are easy to fix for your next video. For your next one, take more risks, don't make as many mistakes, read this guide and you'll probably end up making a 9/10 video.

Et si tu as des questions pour l'encodage ou aimerais des commentaires avant de publier, ne te gêne pas!

Posted - 2011.06.11 08:04:00 - [35]

 

So many mistakes. The only reason you managed to still win is the fact that the mach is hard to kill

Posted - 2011.06.11 10:55:00 - [37]

 

Originally by: leyo690

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Edited by: leyo690 on 10/06/2011 15:38:59
@ wensley & zach donnel :

hmm you guys might be awesome pvpers and experimented mach pilots to qualify those fights as easy and to know what a mach can really do.

Can you show me what you do with a mach, solo ? a vid or some related kills ? I'm still searching but i don't see any video excepted garmonation8 with some solo mach footage, and i'm very interested to see another one. I also looked to your kb, and didn't see any kills done in a bs (i'm not saying that you are bad pvpers though, far of it). Sad you didn't appreciate the fights in there, but as i say earlier, you might appreciate it more if you have same kind of fights in-game. This is not a reproach or something, just an important point to not forget.

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Woah, lad, calm down. Niether Zach or I said anything about your ability. What I said was that for me the video needed a bit more peril to really do it for me. I then said keep it up and make another. For a good example of what I mean by "peril" check out the nano Tempest action in Miriam Sasko's "Flight of Dragons". Sure, its not a 2.5 billion ISK ship but he highlights the very edge of what it can do and in my mind that's what makes for the best PvP videos. Don makes a good point about the speed, actually. If it played a little faster than it would increase the feeling of adrenaline a bit more.

Also, you obviously didn't look at my killboard very hard because my last seven kills are all in a battleship :)

Just for reference, here is what I said again so you can re-read it. Please find the part where I called the fights "easy".

Originally by: Wensley

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Anyway, I pretty much agree with Zach on this. In no way was the video bad but the fights really didn't show the Machariel off for the quality ship that it is and, yeah, Mitternacht . The thing is, the only time you seem to be in any peril you die. I don't know about everyone else but what I really like to see in videos is fights that go down to the wire. Close escapes and hulls on fire, baby! Most of the ones you show don't and just lack that little something to make them stand out.

Keep flying, keep FRAPSing, and keep at it, though!

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Posted - 2011.06.12 05:38:00 - [39]

 

Not that bad but shouldve speed up some battles got quite boring after a while. but still quite good

Posted - 2011.06.12 13:05:00 - [41]

 

Originally by: Daneel Trevize

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Originally by: Wensley

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Miriam Sasko's "Flight of Dragons"

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Can't find this

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I presume Wensley meant There be Dragons... and while it is gratifying to be shown as an example, I have to observe that it is way easier to take a 60M Tempest into a borderline situation than a 2,5b Mach...

I have gotten myself a Mach (that I could not readily replace if I lost it), and I find I am a lot more cautious than I used to be in the nano Pest, as in, I engage about the same gang sizes. Naturally this makes for less interesting footage, and I won't blame anyone else for doing the same.

Posted - 2011.07.26 15:15:00 - [43]

 

Greetings Leyo :)

Posted - 2011.08.04 07:38:00 - [45]

 

im glade my doozy didn't appear in this