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Posted - 2010.08.24 09:41:00 - [1]
 

The latest Chronicle, written by CCP Abraxas, has been published. You can read it here.

Zirse
Minmatar
Brutor Tribe
Posted - 2010.08.24 10:00:00 - [2]
 

Edited by: Zirse on 24/08/2010 10:17:13
Edited by: Zirse on 24/08/2010 10:10:07
Oh those poor, poor, bastards who make us money in PI. And we complain about the clicking. Very Happy

Nicely written, Abraxas! There's always something poetic about an almost broken, too-tired old man refusing to give up without a good fight.

Kenpachi Viktor
Gradient
Electus Matari
Posted - 2010.08.24 10:04:00 - [3]
 

Nasty stuff... Cool

Anddeh McNab
Cadre Assault Force
Posted - 2010.08.24 11:20:00 - [4]
 

Read this last night before nodding off, it was a good read. How hard we drive the non-capsuleers :(

Destination SkillQueue
Are We There Yet
Posted - 2010.08.24 12:07:00 - [5]
 

Thanks for another nice chronicle.

You should write another ruthless exploitation story where a capsuleer corp tyrannizes some non-capsuleer miners. Then either try to inject either the name or logo of Otherworld Enterprises -corporation in to it, and imply it as the origin of the tyrannical orders to get more ore regardless of the horrible cost of human suffering. Very Happy

Chribba
Otherworld Enterprises
Otherworld Empire
Posted - 2010.08.24 12:22:00 - [6]
 

Originally by: Destination SkillQueue
Thanks for another nice chronicle.

You should write another ruthless exploitation story where a capsuleer corp tyrannizes some non-capsuleer miners. Then either try to inject either the name or logo of Otherworld Enterprises -corporation in to it, and imply it as the origin of the tyrannical orders to get more ore regardless of the horrible cost of human suffering. Very Happy
ShockedTwisted Evil

Lord Agger
Gallente
Humanum Erectum
Posted - 2010.08.24 12:39:00 - [7]
 

Yet another brilliant Abraxas cronicle. Cool

I would really like to read about what happent to Kanen next, the cronicle seem somewhat unfinished Question

- A stranger is nothin but a friend you havent met yet!

Illwill Bill
Svea Crusaders
Posted - 2010.08.24 12:40:00 - [8]
 

"Do it in a Kestrel!"
YARRRR!!

Awesome chronicle, by the way.

Lord Agger
Gallente
Humanum Erectum
Posted - 2010.08.24 12:44:00 - [9]
 

Originally by: Destination SkillQueue
Thanks for another nice chronicle.

You should write another ruthless exploitation story where a capsuleer corp tyrannizes some non-capsuleer miners. .....


Have you read the Xenocracy storie ? Twisted Evil

Fly safe!

Aranial
Gallente
Empyrean Warriors
The Obsidian Front
Posted - 2010.08.24 13:01:00 - [10]
 

Nice artwork!

Ze'ev Sinraali
Ataraxia Pharmacies
Posted - 2010.08.24 15:26:00 - [11]
 

Editing issue: The competition's name switches from Corwan to Corwin at the end of his interaction with Kanen.

Pesets
The Hunt Club
Posted - 2010.08.24 18:59:00 - [12]
 

Surprisingly nice chronicle. Not just another horror story written solely for shock value. Even something that the actual mortals reading these chrons can relate to.

As far as nitpicks go,
Quote:
And beyond them, Kanen saw sky-wide nebulas streaking through all viewable space, dotted by planets in their thousands. Each one of those planets, Kanen reflected, by the sheer dint of their glow, would be large enough to eclipse his colony.

There's no way he could see planets in the sky "in their thousands". It's hard enough to even see the planets in the same solar system. He could think about them, but hardly see the sky dotted with them. Worse yet, his colony is on a geologically active asteroid...

Also,
Quote:
As the shuttle hovered towards the colony, Kanen looked out the viewport and marveled at the familiar terrain.

I'm not sure you can hover (hang in place) towards something. Could be wrong though...

Katrina Bekers
Gallente
Fighters Squadron
Posted - 2010.08.25 10:15:00 - [13]
 

Nice chron. Burning out on a lava planet? There must be an hidden pun... Wink

Voltairia
Posted - 2010.08.25 11:32:00 - [14]
 

This is the reason i don't do PI. I prefer killing them by thousands when i lose my BS.

Good read.

Ifly Uwalk
Caldari
Concentrated Evil
Posted - 2010.08.25 17:35:00 - [15]
 

What is it, "Corw a n" or "Corw e n?"

Anyway, cool story bro. Wink

Ifly

Azura Noctis
Amarr
SWARTA
Posted - 2010.08.25 21:08:00 - [16]
 

Edited by: Azura Noctis on 25/08/2010 21:08:05
Excellent as always Abraxas, nice P.I. chronicle. ;)


 

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