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Whispere
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:14:00 - [1]
 

Edited by: Whispere on 16/08/2004 15:39:53

Author's Note: If you haven't read Part One of this Post, clickhere.

Again, silence. I began to wonder what would happen if I reached zero. I knew that I’d claimed my first hull as a pirate, and I had to act the part. And if I knew anything about piracy I knew that they don’t show mercy when they say they’re going to blow you to pieces if you don’t submit.

“10 seconds.”

Nothing. He was dulling the edge of my newfound triumph. The edges of my vision began to cloud a painful red..

“This is your last warning. Reply, or be destroyed.”

Again, quiet. I punched the fire button. A scourge screeched from my launcher and exploded. I’d taken his time, his mining can, his ship, and now, I’d taken his life.

My security status dropped from 0.0 to -1.5. Only pirates have that kind of negative status. Only those ruthless enough to force themselves on the innocence of others.

I immediately felt guilty. I didn’t want to pod him. I’m scrappy and a trickster, not a stone cold killer. If he’d have said, “No.” things would have been easier. But that stony silence had prompted me to act. And act I did. Action that was demanded, swift, and immediate.

Indeed I was ruthless.

His ship pod was full of common mods, his jet can full of Omber. I radioed for a corp-mate (name withheld for security) to come haul it away.

I sat alone in the belt, the blood on my hands. I watched the stars. I was sad.

Tieberius wasn’t finished. He was going to come back.

(This tale concludes in Whispere’s Newbie Adventure Part #6 – The Badger Strikes Back)

Schroni
PPN United
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:24:00 - [2]
 

what can i say, i love your storys Very Happy

keep them coming!

DoZ3r
Caldari
Sacred Templars
Black Swan.
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:35:00 - [3]
 

Murderer Shocked

Wink

Jubba theMad
Caldari
Caldari Provisions
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:40:00 - [4]
 

Yay! Whispere post day is always a good day.

I feel like a kindergarden school kid at story time. Do we get milk and cookies before our nap?

Pyr8
Connoisseurs Of Fine Asian Ladies
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:48:00 - [5]
 

Excellent read, you are truely evil!!

Dark Reaper64
The Short Bus Squad
The SUdden Death Squad
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:57:00 - [6]
 

They say every time a clone is activated a pirate is born somewhere in eve. It seems your time has finally come. Whispere, I would like to bestow upon you your pirate hat, eye patch, and niffty YARRR!!! bumper sticker. May your bounty never be collected and your victims always defensless.

P.S. Please be a dumb noob every once in awhile and get blown up and post about it or im going to have to stop reading forums.ugh

Koda
Caldari Provisions
Posted - 2004.08.16 14:58:00 - [7]
 

Good read. You get used to the blood.


Riddari
VIT
Posted - 2004.08.16 15:25:00 - [8]
 

Edited by: Riddari on 16/08/2004 15:31:11
Nice once more.

It would be better though to have kept the story in the same thread instead of splitting into two threads.

If you find that you have written a post which is too long for a single entry (something I often experience) add the second part as a reply to the first part, continuing there.

Whispere, hit the QUOTE button on this posting of mine and then copy and paste the following:

-begin quote below this line-
Whispere's Newbie Adventure #1
Whispere's Newbie Adventure #2
Whispere's Newbie Adventure #3
Whispere's Newbie Adventure #4
Whispere's Newbie Adventure #5
-end quote above this line-

and paste this into your signature instead of your current url listing.

This way you get links.

xAoC2
Caldari
Doomheim
Posted - 2004.08.16 15:51:00 - [9]
 

haha i love these stories. welcome to the darkside.YARRRR!!YARRRR!!YARRRR!!YARRRR!!YARRRR!!

M0RIARTY
Minmatar
Haita de lupi
Legiunea ROmana
Posted - 2004.08.16 16:05:00 - [10]
 

I guess you had to get lucky sometime YARRRR!!

Once again a nice well crafted story, keep em comming Very Happy


Wyckoff
Amarr
Posted - 2004.08.16 16:09:00 - [11]
 

Whispere,

I've followed your mis-adventures and exploits, and I am impressed. You can compare your stories to the epic journey of Horatio Hornblower; from ensign to Admiral, from Newbie to Veteran. Except, where Horatio always choose the noble route, never allowing himself the indignities of inner-turmoil, you have choosen to dwell amongst the base creatures of this universe.

Whispere the Wicked. No longer innocent, instead, stained with their blood. We all feel your pain. Sharing it makes the burden of guilt lighter.

Now, hurry up and finish part #6!




Gerome Doutrande
Posted - 2004.08.16 16:24:00 - [12]
 

very entertaining, just like your previous reports. Very Happy

Elessara Allarel
Posted - 2004.08.16 17:15:00 - [13]
 

I wonder if the GM's/moderators are readin these? Do they only reply when someone does something bad?

Lepakko
Posted - 2004.08.16 19:55:00 - [14]
 

hahaha..

Damn i love you storys m8 Laughing


Shanara Red
Caldari
Caldari Provisions
Posted - 2004.08.16 20:16:00 - [15]
 

Murderer, ruthless ... cold even ... Just like Koda says, you get used to it ... the first podkill is the hardest.

But try this reasoning on for size:

... as a newly born and 'now-marked' tewibwy ebil scourge of space it is your duty to 'inform' the fellow space wanderers of their weakness. Maybe you actually did him a favour! Next time, he won't be so careless and will unleash drone hell on you much faster. As odds go, you should have (again Very Happy) been pasted over the Veldspar rocks by those drones ... you 'informed' him Twisted Evil ... and maybe it was actually much cheaper for him to learn this lesson at this point in time and loose a Thorax, than learn it later, loosing a bs with a bay full of drones and a full set of implants ... Very Happy

... well, hope it helps you get over your first podkill, and maybe inspires you do do more great deeds in the future .. hehe ... the second will not be so difficult at all ... trust me ... Twisted Evil ... it can get addictive ...

Keep up the good work and remember ... Mining will kill ya! Wink

P.S.- BTW, nice kill. YARRRR!! ... YARR !!!

Strider oTO
Posted - 2004.08.16 22:44:00 - [16]
 

That last one brought a tear to my eye! Bravo!

Universe - 4 / Whispere - 1

Calyn
Amarr
Posted - 2004.08.16 22:51:00 - [17]
 

Edited by: Calyn on 16/08/2004 22:58:05
As all your other reads, marvellous. I was intending to be a goody two-shoes, but your adventures and mishaps are having an oddly inspring effect Shocked

You seem to have so much fun YARRRR!!

Vex Seraphim
Gallente
Aliastra
Posted - 2004.08.16 22:53:00 - [18]
 

ahh.. yet another Masterpiece by Whispere.

Van Halen
Gallente
Aliastra
Posted - 2004.08.17 02:27:00 - [19]
 

Edited by: Van Halen on 17/08/2004 02:34:40
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Seleene
Body Count Inc.
Pandemic Legion
Posted - 2004.08.17 05:42:00 - [20]
 

Okay, seriously, you need to start a website. These are spectacular. Cool

Deneba Zaavi
Jokers
Posted - 2004.08.17 07:39:00 - [21]
 

Yarrrrrr!

Sooner or later we all have to walk down the plank!

Anyway, please do not stop to post your stories, they are great, well written and like a feuilleton to me.:D

Keep up the good work.


BMGT
Minmatar
Brutor Tribe
Posted - 2004.08.17 23:18:00 - [22]
 

YARRRR!!

Mid Slots
Caldari Provisions
Posted - 2004.08.18 06:47:00 - [23]
 

Nicely done. You gave him plenty of time. They didn't pay. They died. Don't forget to scoop the corpse too and have the CONCORD Pod Kill email framed and mounted on the wall at your favorite station.

Kick back with some Spiced Wine and a Mind Flood and enjoy the moment.

Yarr!!!! YARRRR!!

P.S. Now you have a security status problem. Time to start pod killing in 0.0. Very Happy

Ribosom
Intergalactic Serenity
Posted - 2004.08.18 07:29:00 - [24]
 

I feel there´s a young Jack Sparrow entering the eve universe.


hey you veteran pirates. Do us loyal readers a favour and leave him alone.

Shamrock
Evolution
Band of Brothers
Posted - 2004.08.18 11:15:00 - [25]
 

If a post is usually more than 5 lines long. I won't even read it. But your first few sentences pulled me in and I even read the rest of your stories. I hope to read much more.

Riddari
VIT
Posted - 2004.08.18 11:19:00 - [26]
 

Originally by: Shamrock
If a post is usually more than 5 lines long. I won't even read it. But your first few sentences pulled me in and I even read the rest of your stories. I hope to read much more.
Just imagine what you have missed out in all those 5+ lines posts you never bothered to read! Wink


 

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